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  • Originally posted by Robcbh View Post
    I forced myself to sit down for an hour last night and write.
    That's what I need to do!

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    • Bollocks! Blood and Hellfire! Hit a brick wall , scrapped it and started again....

      " The world is indeed comic, but the joke is on mankind. " - H.P. Lovecraft

      Read latest fiction " The Closet by rhill10" in DEMETIONS at http://www.bloody-disgusting.com/for...t=61754&page=5

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      • Originally posted by Robcbh View Post
        To bad you were like a year and a half ahead of the times man! That PSYCHO IDOL piece would have been brilliant for this Write off. I forced myself to sit down for an hour last night and write. Its not overtly Cat andMouse and im not exactly moving in a new direction, but I am happy with ti non the less.
        I think I've got a new idea similar to my first but in a new direction.

        " The world is indeed comic, but the joke is on mankind. " - H.P. Lovecraft

        Read latest fiction " The Closet by rhill10" in DEMETIONS at http://www.bloody-disgusting.com/for...t=61754&page=5

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        • Had a sort of breakthrough or Epiphany with mine, should have some real horror in it and not be just a concept piece, it'll take some re-engineering, but that part shouldn't be too hard really.
          I met her, fifteen years ago; I was told there was nothing left; no reason, no conscience, no understanding; and not even the most rudimentary sense of life or death, of good or evil, right or wrong. I met this cow, with this blank, pale, emotionless face, and the blackest eyes... the devil's eyes. I spent eight years trying to reach her, and then another seven trying to keep her locked up because I realized that what was living behind that cow's eyes was purely and simply... evil.

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          • Hey guys and gals. Ive been in the process of moving and comcast in all their ineptitude can figure out how to ctivate my interent. But while at work ive been working on my story, and its shaping up.
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            • Cool, been busy myself, need to find some time to really work on mine.

              Might be pretty short this time, 1500-2000 words give or take
              I met her, fifteen years ago; I was told there was nothing left; no reason, no conscience, no understanding; and not even the most rudimentary sense of life or death, of good or evil, right or wrong. I met this cow, with this blank, pale, emotionless face, and the blackest eyes... the devil's eyes. I spent eight years trying to reach her, and then another seven trying to keep her locked up because I realized that what was living behind that cow's eyes was purely and simply... evil.

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              • About a week and a half to go, stories are due on the 14th/or in my inbox Tuesday morning the 15th

                I'm kinda done myself, tho hope to beef it up between now and then. It's all there, but could def use some more fleshing out.

                How's everyone else doing?
                I met her, fifteen years ago; I was told there was nothing left; no reason, no conscience, no understanding; and not even the most rudimentary sense of life or death, of good or evil, right or wrong. I met this cow, with this blank, pale, emotionless face, and the blackest eyes... the devil's eyes. I spent eight years trying to reach her, and then another seven trying to keep her locked up because I realized that what was living behind that cow's eyes was purely and simply... evil.

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                • Struggling might not make it this time round, it would be the first time. But I'll try ...

                  " The world is indeed comic, but the joke is on mankind. " - H.P. Lovecraft

                  Read latest fiction " The Closet by rhill10" in DEMETIONS at http://www.bloody-disgusting.com/for...t=61754&page=5

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                  • My sotry was going really well, and then suddenly I bloated it and probably have to scrap some 500 words and rework it.
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                    • Sent to werecrow, Willow.
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                      • KK, got it

                        Hope to find some time to go over my story today myself, give it a few tweaks.
                        I met her, fifteen years ago; I was told there was nothing left; no reason, no conscience, no understanding; and not even the most rudimentary sense of life or death, of good or evil, right or wrong. I met this cow, with this blank, pale, emotionless face, and the blackest eyes... the devil's eyes. I spent eight years trying to reach her, and then another seven trying to keep her locked up because I realized that what was living behind that cow's eyes was purely and simply... evil.

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                        • Made the deadline... just! I think (hope). It's a little raw and eleventh hour rushed but I'm fairly happy how it turned out. sent to werecrow, plus Pmed incase of any problems ,Willow thanks.
                          Last edited by Erebus Dirge; 10-14-2013, 02:15 PM.

                          " The world is indeed comic, but the joke is on mankind. " - H.P. Lovecraft

                          Read latest fiction " The Closet by rhill10" in DEMETIONS at http://www.bloody-disgusting.com/for...t=61754&page=5

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                          • Been a rough few days here, but I'll get on posting the stories soon

                            Got 3 total, looks like that might be it I guess, got to find the time to read/screen them, can maybe do that tonight if not tomorrow
                            I met her, fifteen years ago; I was told there was nothing left; no reason, no conscience, no understanding; and not even the most rudimentary sense of life or death, of good or evil, right or wrong. I met this cow, with this blank, pale, emotionless face, and the blackest eyes... the devil's eyes. I spent eight years trying to reach her, and then another seven trying to keep her locked up because I realized that what was living behind that cow's eyes was purely and simply... evil.

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                            • 1st story is up. I'll post one each day here til all 3 are up, so take a look, read, rate, and enjoy
                              I met her, fifteen years ago; I was told there was nothing left; no reason, no conscience, no understanding; and not even the most rudimentary sense of life or death, of good or evil, right or wrong. I met this cow, with this blank, pale, emotionless face, and the blackest eyes... the devil's eyes. I spent eight years trying to reach her, and then another seven trying to keep her locked up because I realized that what was living behind that cow's eyes was purely and simply... evil.

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                              • Story #1 - The Misbehavers by Willowfang

                                R: 4 C: 3 A: 3 T: 3.33
                                R: 3 C: 3 A: 3 T: 3.00
                                R: 4 C: 2 A: 3 T: 3.00
                                Total:
                                R: 3.67 C: 2.67 A: 3.00 Total: 3.17

                                Story #2 - Untitled by Robcbh

                                R: 2.0 C: 3.5 A: 3.5 T: 3.00
                                R: 2.5 C: 4.0 A: 3.5 T: 3.33
                                Total:
                                R: 2.25 C: 3.75 A: 3.5 Total: 3.17

                                Story #3 - Intestinal Fortitude by Erebus Dirge
                                R: 2.5 C:3.5 A: 3.0 T: 3:00
                                R: 3.0 C:5.0 A: 4.5 T: 4.17
                                Total:
                                R: 2.75 C: 4.25 A: 3.75 Total: 3.58

                                Highest Concept, Atmosphere, and Total: Intestinal Fortitude by Erebus Dirge

                                Highest Readability: The Misbehavers by Willowfang

                                1st place:
                                Intestinal Fortitude by Erebus Dirge

                                2nd place:
                                The Misbehavers by Willowfang

                                3rd place:
                                Untitled by Robcbh
                                I met her, fifteen years ago; I was told there was nothing left; no reason, no conscience, no understanding; and not even the most rudimentary sense of life or death, of good or evil, right or wrong. I met this cow, with this blank, pale, emotionless face, and the blackest eyes... the devil's eyes. I spent eight years trying to reach her, and then another seven trying to keep her locked up because I realized that what was living behind that cow's eyes was purely and simply... evil.

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